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Book Review: Zelde M’Tana by F. M. Busby (Series, Prequel) (Bottom of TBR Pile Challenge)
Summary:
Zelde M’Tana is one of the lost children, living away from UET influence and welfare or adults at all in gangs of violent kids. But she gets captured and sent in outerspace on a journey toward being a sex slave on a mining planet. When the ship mutinies, her chances for a future change for the better.
Review:
I picked this up because I heard it is the prequel for a black woman spaceship captain from a scifi series in the 70s. I was intrigued (who wouldn’t be by that cover) but I was ultimately disappointed by the characterization of Zelde.
This prequel is designed to be able to be read as a standalone, so that’s how I approached it. It’s not entirely clear what the problem is in this futuristic world, but it appears that an evil corporation known as the UET has taken over governing everybody and generally encourages violence and treats everyone like dirt. There are a few escaped ships and some colonies they have set up on other planets where people live freely. This prequel, then, basically tracks how Zelde comes to be escaped.
I almost stopped reading the book very early on during Zelde’s lost child years. She is a lost child who joins a gang and winds up climbing the ranks. There’s obviously a lot of violence. What I wasn’t expecting was for Zelde to be a rapist. In the context of the gang wars, when her gang overtakes another, she takes the leader of that gang and rapes him in front of everyone. (She achieves this by tying a rope around his penis and tugging on it until he gets hard). In one instance, perhaps in both, I’ve kind of tried to scrub it from my mind, she kills the man right after raping him. Now, the thing to understand is, Zelde is not ever presented as an anti-hero. She is 100% supposed to be a hero that the reader roots for. We want her to escape UET; we want her to succeed. But she’s a rapist. A hero rapist isn’t a character I can get behind, and I wouldn’t want other readers to either.
I kept reading the book because I was wondering if this would ever be addressed. If, perhaps after Zelde escapes and is able to get some education and safety she would realize what she did was wrong. But that never happens anywhere in the book. It’s really disappointing.
The second problem I have with the book, which is somewhat related, is in how it presents female sexuality. Basically, in this world, all women will have sex with other women if a man happens to not be around and convenient right when they get their urge. So, for instance, Zelde prefers men, but she’ll take a woman to pair up with if a man isn’t right handy. She also will dump her female pairing the instant there’s a hint she can get with a man. Similarly, there’s a triad relationship on the ship in which a man, Dopples, is paired with two blonde women. The women read as sisters, although it’s possible they’re not. In any case, this is one of our typical interactions with them:
She [Zelde] could never tell the two blonde women apart. The one who opened the door this time had bangs now–but so did the other, standing behind a little. Both naked, hair messed, a little sweaty and out of breath–were they having somebody else in here? no–not on Dopples; they wouldn’t dare that. Must be playing together, just by themselves. That figured–for two women, one man had to be short rations. (page 127)
It all feels like a misreading of female bisexuality. Female bisexuality isn’t a result of an appetite for sex that is just so high it can’t be satiated by just one person or that must be satiated at every opportunity. Bisexuality is not this idea that women need to have sex constantly and so will take just anyone, with a slight preference toward men. While I appreciate that a book published in 1980 includes the idea that women can be attracted to other women it reads from the perspective of a male gaze idea of female bisexuality instead of the reality. Similarly, not all women are bisexual and yet every single woman in this book seems willing to jump into bed with another woman if a man doesn’t happen to be available or in the context of a M/F/F threesome. Not all women are bisexual. Not all bisexual women prefer to pair up with men (some do, but not all). Not all bisexual women are open to the idea of a threesome. The only hint to the idea that not all women are bisexual that the book concedes to is that one character is asked at one point if she is “all for women” (page 257) as in are you a lesbian. (She is not, if you were wondering). It is just as erasing of bisexuality to operate from the assumption that all women are bisexual (but not all men) as it is to say none are. Some straight men may like the idea that women are off sleeping with each other every time their backs are turned and that of course any woman would want to participate in a M/F/F threesome given the opportunity, but that is not the reality.
One final issue I had with the book, which is a bit minor but is still annoying, is a bit of grammar. Almost every time a character says something like “would’ve” or “could’ve,” it’s spelled as “would of” or “could of.” It does this outside of times the characters speak, so it’s not an attempt at dialect.
A positive to say about the book is the plot is fast-moving and covers a lot of ground. Zelde’s life is eventful, and if a reader isn’t a fan of one phase, it will quickly change. Also, Zelde’s race is not just mentioned and then forgotten. Her existence as a black woman and what that means for her is confronted in the book in various ways. Also, Zelde rocks a natural hairstyle and gauges her ears at one point while still climbing the ranks of the ship.
Overall, this 1980 scifi book contains a fast plot and interesting future but its representation of female sexuality may be bothersome to some readers. Readers who seek to avoid scenes involving rape or being asked to identify with a rapist should avoid it. Recommended to readers of classic scifi and those interested in seeing representations of black women in literature in the 1970s and 1980s.
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2 out of 5 stars
Length: 316 pages – average but on the longer side
Source: The now-defunct SwapTree (like PaperBackSwap).
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Bottom of TBR Pile Challenge
Book Review: A Local Habitation by Seanan McGuire (Series, #2)
Summary:
Toby Daye, changeling, private detective, and knight to the knowe of the powerful Sylvester, feels like she has her feet back under her after returning to human form after 14 years as a fish and also solving the murder of a powerful fae. When her liege requests she go investigate why he hasn’t heard from his niece in a while, she expects it to be a quick visit, although possibly a bit irritating since she has to bring along young Quentin, a teenaged full-blooded Daoine Sidhe fae. Sylvester’s niece just so happens to own the only fae tech company, and she claims that she has indeed been calling her uncle. But when an employee turns up dead and Toby finds out there have been two mysterious deaths previously, she realizes there’s more here than immediately meets the eye, particularly since she can’t read anything from the blood of the dead.
Review:
I enjoyed the first book in this urban fantasy series about a changeling investigator so much that I immediately checked out the second ebook from the Boston Public Library on my kindle. (If you have an ereader, definitely check out if your local public library will let you do this. It saves me so much money!) This book brought me right back into the wonderfully built world of Toby and offered up a new murder mystery even more mysterious than the first.
Readers of the first book know that Toby’s special fae power is the ability to read a person’s memories from tasting their blood. I found it startling and intriguing that McGuire immediately took this power away from Toby in the second book. There’s nothing to read in the victims’ blood. Why is that? It’s a plot I may have expected in the fourth or fifth book, but not so soon. From a writing perspective, it’s bold to take away your hero’s superpower in only the second book in the series. And it works. There’s ultimately a logical explanation for why the blood is telling Toby nothing (and no, it’s not Toby’s fault), so it never feels like a gimmick. I think that is what I like most about this series. The author utilizes techniques that could easily turn into a gimmick but she always keeps it from actually being a gimmick so it instead is utterly engaging and enthralling.
The fae world is also clearly much larger than we originally saw in the first book. The fae have a tech company so that they can rework modern technology to work in the fae knowes. On top of that, we also meet many more races of fae, as well as ways for the races we already know to exist and appear. For instance, Sylvester’s niece, January, has a daughter. But her daughter is in fact a tree fairy. Tree fairies are normally tied to a tree or a forest, so how is she in this tech building? January tied her branch to the computer server after her forest was destroyed, and she was able to keep living after adapting into the server and treating the server as a forest. Very cool idea, and it works beautifully in the story.
Even though I was basically able to predict whodunnit, I couldn’t figure out why or how, so the plot still satisfied me as I waited for Toby to figure all of that out.
One thing that kind of disappointed me in the book is that Toby meets a type of fae who can emit a magical scent that makes the person smelling it think they are massively attracted to him and thus sleep with him. They then become obsessed with this type of fairy, and the fae feeds off of the obsession. I was glad to see the book treat this as rape (basically drugging someone into sleeping with you) but I was also disappointed to see our heroine have to face off against an attempted rape. As I said in my review of the previous book, I get really tired of urban fantasy heroines being threatened constantly by rape. My hope is that this was a one-off type thing to introduce the concept of this type of fae rather than the new normal for the series.
Toby herself and the worldbuilding continue to be my two favorite aspects of the series. The plots are good, but I’d read almost anything plot-wise to visit Toby and her world again.
The essence of Toby and why I love her is evident in this quote:
Long dresses weren’t designed for walking in the woods. My mother could’ve made the walk without stumbling; she fits into the world that well, even insane. That’s what it means to be a pureblood. I stumble and fall, and I always get up and keep going. That’s what it means to be a changeling. (page 371)
Picking a quote to show why I love the worldbuilding so much is a bit harder, but here’s a particular favorite that really punched a visual of what this world is like home for me. In this passage, Toby is explaining that she and her mother are Daoine Sidhe and can see memories through blood:
My mother was so strong she could taste the death of plants. She could never stomach maple syrup; she said it tasted like trees screaming. (page 91)
As a born and raised Vermonter who grew up harvesting maple syrup, that line was a bit of a gut punch. An eloquent one.
Overall, readers of the first entry in the series will be pleased with this second outing. Toby continues to be a strong character set in a fascinating world. The mystery plot is another murder, but it is a series of murders and has a very different solving pattern and outcome than the first. Recommended to fans of the first book to continue on to the second as soon as they can.
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4 out of 5 stars
Length: 390 pages – average but on the longer side
Source: Library
Previous Books in Series:
Rosemary and Rue, review
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Book Review: Set Adrift by D.S. Kenn (Series, #1)
Summary:
Terric, nickname T, a half shifter half demon, and his girlfriend Jordyn, full vampire, have decided to move from New York City to Provincetown, Massachusetts. T has an opportunity to work as head of security at a nightclub and bar that caters to the supernatural, and he thinks the move will be good for he and Jordyn. Jordyn had a nightmarishly abusive past, and T has been helping her heal through a safe, consenting BDSM relationship. But his love for Jordyn is not one of a mate; it is one of a friend. He intuitively knows that his mate will be a man but he struggles to accept this, due to suffering he has endured in the demon realm. When Jordyn decides it is time for her to stand on her own two feet and move out, she also encourages T to confront himself and grow as well. But all T feels is set adrift.
Review:
Every November/December I open up to submissions for books to review in the upcoming year on my blog. When I saw this one in the submissions, I was excited. Not very much paranormal romance is submitted to me, and paranormal romance with a bisexual main character is nigh on impossible to find. Plus, I love Provincetown. This paranormal romance features a unique set of characters and a wide variety of sex scenes but its world building struggles some.
The strongest aspect of the book is that its main character Terric is so unique in paranormal romance. Terric actually describes himself perfectly:
I’m an anomaly. A fucking bisexual demon shifter. Not really all of any one thing…. I don’t really fit in most categories, you know. (page 33)
First, I love love love the fact that the hero of the book isn’t just bisexual, but he actually uses the term to describe himself as such. This may not seem like a big deal, but it is quite rare to have a character self-identify as bisexual and simultaneously have that character be one of the good guy leads. I really applaud the author for going there. Terric struggles with his sexuality but not for the reasons the reader might expect. Provincetown, for those who don’t know, is known for being a small town with a large accepting queer community. T’s community would accept him for who he is, but he struggles with accepting and loving himself. The reason given for this is that when he is summoned to the demon realm (as a half demon, he is subject to hell’s dominion), he is sometimes subject to punishment that consists of rape by other male demons (or half demons). The reason he has trouble imagining being mated with a man is due to this trauma. Bisexual men experience a higher rate of rape than straight or gay men (source), and I think it’s a good thing that the author works this into T’s past within the context of his supernatural world. The rape is not misrepresented as causing his bisexuality but rather as a trauma he must get over to fully embrace his sexuality for what it is. It’s not a storyline seen very often, and it’s handled well.
Similarly, the BDSM subplot in the first half of the book is also handled well. The BDSM is completely presented as something both partners have consented to with pre-agreed upon boundaries that are respected. It is also shown as something that is therapeutically used to help Jordyn overcome her past trauma. This is a use for BDSM that some readers may not know but it is clearly well-understood by the author and well presented in the book. Plus, the BDSM scenes are well-written and just the right level of steamy.
Unfortunately, the world that T and Jordyn live in is not as well fleshed-out as they are. In particular, the workings of the supernatural world are never fully explained and can be a bit confusing. For instance, vampires can apparently have children (as in, conceive and give birth to them, not as in turning humans into vampires), but it is never explained how. Also the logistics of mixing different supernatural races are unclear. For instance, there is one character who is 100% shifter, but his parents are both half vampire and half shifter. Even the character himself doesn’t know how that worked out to him being pure shifter. Some readers probably wouldn’t be bothered by the lack of details and world building regarding the supernatural and just how it works in this world, but others will be.
There are a few minor editing mistakes, the most startling of which is that the book on page 142 suddenly changes from indenting new paragraphs to having a line space between them (like how paragraphs appear on this blog). I have no preference for one over the other, but consistency throughout the book is preferred. There is also one plot point that bothered me. At one point a character is established as being tipsy. He then kisses someone and, freaked out about it, decides to leave and states that he can because he is “sober as a judge,” and the other character agrees he is fit to drive (page 152). Unless that kiss lasted an hour or two, there’s no way he went from tipsy to sober as a judge in the span of one kiss (unless something supernatural was going on that was not explained). Similarly, sometimes the book veers too far into telling rather than showing, particularly in the scenes that are not sex scenes. For instance, in one scene, this occurs:
He told Kevin a little bit about his own upbringing, just the basics. (page 144)
At this point, the reader does not know much about this character’s upbringing. Why not write out the dialogue in which the character tells Kevin about it, rather than telling the reader that the character tells Kevin? The sex scenes never veer into this telling rather than showing zone, and it would be nice if the plot points didn’t either.
There is also a chapter that is called the “epilogue,” which kind of bothered me since it is a direct continuance of the plot in the previous chapters. No significant time is skipped, nothing in the future is explained. It is basically the last chapter in the book. I am uncertain as to why it is thus called an epilogue. I was expecting it to update me on the future of these characters, not simply continue the story in a direct linear fashion from the last chapter.
Sex acts in the book include: anal sex (male on female), BDSM (male dom, female sub), and M/M kissing/touching. Rape is mentioned as an occurrence in the past but is not depicted. Those readers looking for more in-depth M/M scenes should keep their eye out for the next book in the series, as it appears that a M/M relationship will be building to greater intimacy in the next book.
Overall, this is a welcome addition to the paranormal romance genre, featuring a unique cast of characters, including a bisexual half-demon, half-shifter male hero. The book contains a wide variety of sex scenes, including M/F BDSM and M/M kissing/touching. Readers interested in in-depth world building may be disappointed by the lack of explanation of the supernatural world these characters inhabit. Those looking for a quick, steamy read will enjoy these characters and the development of them that goes on in-between their well-written sex scenes.
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3 out of 5 stars
Length: 139 pages – novella
Source: Kindle copy from author in exchange for my honest review
April Updates and March Reflections
Boston’s space savers got repurposed into ice falling warning signs.
Hello my lovely readers!
I mentioned at the beginning of March that I was hoping to start doing a monthly post reflecting on my reading and writing, blog happenings, and mentioning any updates that need to be mentioned. Here’s the first one!
I did quite a bit of work on the blog this month. You already know that I upgraded to my own domain name. I also totally revamped my astore. For those who don’t know, an astore is a listing of items hosted by Amazon. I use mine to conveniently list out books I have read and reviewed on this blog that I recommend. Every book listed in my astore has received 4 or 5 star reviews on this blog. Previously the lists were mostly just divided into fiction or nonfiction. That was getting unwieldy. They are now divided into much more convenient genres, such as historic fiction or urban fantasy. As always, my astore is linked to in the sidebar of the blog under “Shop 4 and 5 Star Reads,” or you can click through to it right here. I hope my readers find it useful when looking for something to read for themselves or to pick up as a gift for another.
I’ve been book blogging since March 2009. I was thinking that it would be nice to highlight some of the older books I reviewed and really enjoyed. So every month there is now going to be a book of the month. The book highlighted will be one I read and gave 4 or 5 stars to in the same month of a previous year. The book will be featured in the blog sidebar and also in the landing page of my astore. For the month of April, the book of the month will be:
Glasshouse
First reviewed in April 2011.
“I recommend this to scifi fans, and highly recommend it to GLBTQ readers and advocates.”
My monthly updates will briefly mention the book of the month. I hope you all enjoy the monthly throwback!
The final change to the sidebar is I have added links to my publications. So be sure to check that out!
One final addition to the blog is a new page (pages are linked to on the header). The new page is called “TW Lists,” and you can view it by clicking here. Basically, I realized that I frequently find myself noting the content of rape or attempted rape in books that I am reviewing whose blurbs gave no hint as to having that content. There is absolutely nothing wrong with a book having a plot point of rape or attempted rape, but some readers seek to avoid them for personal reasons. Some readers just don’t like reading about rape or attempted rape, while others find reading about rape or attempted rape to be triggering for a mental illness they may have, such as PTSD or OCD. It is for the latter reason that a content note like the one I am providing is often called a “trigger warning,” often shortened to an acronym of “tw” followed by the content note. For instance, “tw: rape.”
The content I by far find myself needing to note in my reviews more than any other is rape or attempted rape. I thus decided to curate this list of books I have reviewed on my blog that contain rape or attempted rape. A book being included on this list does not necessarily mean I consider it a bad book or a badly written book. It is purely a content note. To see the list, click on out to the TW Lists page. I hope my readers who need to a content note on rape or attempted rape will find this listing helpful.
That’s it for the blog updates! How was my reading, reviewing, and writing this month?
March books read: 3 (1 urban fantasy, 1 scifi YA, 1 paranormal romance)
March reviews: 6
Other March posts: 1 update, 1 short story, 1 giveaway, 1 reading challenge sign-up
March writing: My current project is progressing, and I am excited at a new direction I came up with thanks to a helpful chat with my fiancé. I also posted an older short story to this blog. You can read it here.
Coming up in April: Get ready for an influx of fantasy, folklore, fairy tales, and mythology, thanks to my participation in Once Upon a Time IX (sign-up post). I have also finished reading the first of my accepted ARCs for 2015. That review will be posted, along with a giveaway!
Happy April and happy reading!
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